User:Benrey/Sandbox:Noble Dog/Comic
Act 1: Alispan Andras
Title Page
Noble Dog
Act I - Alispan Andras
Page 1
Overview
- Panels: 5 [R3:1/3/1]
- Characters: 8 / 7 appearances / 1 mentioned / 0 speaking
- Kalman I [Debut]
- Rozina I [Debut]
- Geza III [Debut]
- Beleknegini [Debut]
- Sesztek I [Debut]
- Andras I [Debut]
- Szerafin [Debut]
- Almo II [Debut/Mentioned Only]
Panel 1
Initial page-wide shot of the coat of arms of the House of Velencei. The coat of arms of the House of Velencei is in the center with what appears to be a brick background. There is an ominous red glow that is radiating from the 4th panel.
Text [Narrator]: The year is one thousand seven hundred and forty two. Kalman the First, Első Nemes of the House of Velencei...”
Panel 2
A portrait of Kalman I, looking directly to the left. It is slightly on fire on the right side. Kalman is wearing the hat of the Elso Nemes with the pin of a golden Chested Kithara. There are four chain links in the shape of rectangles that are dangling from every corner of his hat. There are 5 different plumes on the centerpiece pin of his hat.
Text [Narrator]: “Is dead.”
Panel 3
Another portrait, this one in the middle of burning from the bottom to the top, shows part of Rozina I. Rozina wears a smaller hat with one plume attached to the side of her hat, pinned by a circle.
Text [Narrator]: “As is the sister of Kalman, Rozina the First. Leaving the youngest of them to rule.”
Panel 4
A final portrait of Geza III in his youth. Unlike Rozina I and Kalman I, Geza III's portrait is relatively untouched. Geza is wearing the same hat that Kalman I is wearing with only one plume and a silver Chested Kithara.
Text [Narrator]: Geza III, now enthroned as the Első Nemes of the House of Velencei.
Panel 5
A page-wide panel shot of the enthronement of Geza. The setting is the Cathedral of Esztergom. From the center is Geza, to the left is his wife Beleknegini and to the right is the Apostolic Presbyter Szerafin. Standing to the left of Beleknegini is Sesztek. Standing to the right of Szerafin is Andras.
Text [Narrator]: And as Első Nemes, he was crowned in splendor in the Cathedral of Esztergom.”
Page 2
Overview
- Panels: 4 [R2:2/2]
- Characters: 3 / 3 appearances / 0 mentioned / 0 speaking
- Andras I
- Clarence [Debut]
- Father Marfi [Debut]
Panel 1
Portrayal of a scenic view of the village of Velencei Németújvár, which sits in a deforested area of a forested valley. There are two roads that are going from two opposite points of the village. The setting is a misty morning. There is one road that goes to an undetailed building, the Abbey.
Panel 2
Panel with a clear view of the Abbey Upon Velencei Németújvár and the former sections of the Abbey. The Abbey is significantly higher atop the village. Father Marfi is seen as a small, undetailed figure atop the open bell-tower.
Panel 3
Panel with a view of the Manor. The Manor is at the center of the village, seemingly walled off and overlooking. Within one of the houses is a light. There are undetailed villagers wandering about in front of the Manor.
Panel 4
A view of Andras still sleeping in his bed while Clarence starts to tidy the room, specifically lighing the torch in the room.
Page 3
Overview
- Panels: 5 [R3:3/2]
- Characters: 2 / 2 appearances / 0 mentioned / 1 speaking
- Andras I
- Clarence [Non-Speaking]
Panel 1, 2 & 3
A combination of close-up shots that portray Andras shaking his head left and right. The first panel shows him blurred shaking to the left, the second in the center and the third to the right.
Panel 4
A square view of the bed with Andras lying wide awake and somewhat startled. Clarence is visible on the left side, looking at Andras confused.
Panel 5
Clarence looking down at Andras, with Andras now relieved. Clarence's emotion changes to happiness.
Text [Andras/Sound Effect]: *Sigh*
Text [Andras]: "Thank goodness it's just your Clarence."